She Looks Back Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGH IJAH KLMK DNOK PQRSTD FKKKUKVK KWSKHLX GGXYKFZVK GKKZ A2ZGZZ DZZJZ ZZKKB2 B2KZDDC2 ZB2KB2D2B2D C2The pale bubbles | A |
The lovely pale gold bubbles of the globe flowers | B |
In a great swarm clotted and single | C |
Went rolling in the dusk towards the river | D |
To where the sunset hung its wan gold cloths | E |
And you stood alone watching them go | F |
And that mother love like a demon drew you from me | G |
Towards England | H |
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Along the road after nightfall | I |
Along the glamorous birch tree avenue | J |
Across the river levels | A |
We went in silence and you staring to England | H |
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So then there shone within the jungle darkness | K |
Of the long lush under grass a glow worm's sudden | L |
Green lantern of pure light a little intense fusing triumph | M |
White and haloed with fire mist down in the tangled darkness | K |
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Then you put your hand in mine again kissed me and we struggled to be together | D |
And the little electric flashes went with us in the grass | N |
Tiny lighthouses little souls of lanterns courage burst into an explosion of green light | O |
Everywhere down in the grass where darkness was ravelled in darkness | K |
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Still the kiss was a touch of bitterness on my mouth | P |
Like salt burning in | Q |
And my hand withered in your hand | R |
For you were straining with a wild heart back back again | S |
Back to those children you had left behind to all the ons of the past | T |
And I was here in the under dusk of the Isar | D |
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At home we leaned in the bedroom window | F |
Of the old Bavarian Gasthaus | K |
And the frogs in the pool beyond thrilled with exuberance | K |
Like a boiling pot the pond crackled with happiness | K |
Like a rattle a child spins round for joy the night rattled | U |
With the extravagance of the frogs | K |
And you leaned your cheek on mine | V |
And I suffered it wanting to sympathise | K |
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At last as you stood your white gown falling from your breasts | K |
You looked into my eyes and said But this is joy | W |
I acquiesced again | S |
But the shadow of lying was in your eyes | K |
The mother in you fierce as a murderess glaring to England | H |
Yearning towards England towards your young children | L |
Insisting upon your motherhood devastating | X |
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Still the joy was there also you spoke truly | G |
The joy was not to be driven off so easily | G |
Stronger than fear or destructive mother love it stood flickering | X |
The frogs helped also whirring away | Y |
Yet how I have learned to know that look in your eyes | K |
Of horrid sorrow | F |
How I know that glitter of salt dry sterile sharp corrosive salt | Z |
Not tears but white sharp brine | V |
Making hideous your eyes | K |
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I have seen it felt it in my mouth my throat my chest my belly | G |
Burning of powerful salt burning eating through my defenceless nakedness | K |
I have been thrust into white sharp crystals | K |
Writhing twisting superpenetrated | Z |
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Ah Lot's Wife Lot's Wife | A2 |
The pillar of salt the whirling horrible column of salt like a waterspout | Z |
That has enveloped me | G |
Snow of salt white burning eating salt | Z |
In which I have writhed | Z |
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Lot's Wife Not Wife but Mother | D |
I have learned to curse your motherhood | Z |
You pillar of salt accursed | Z |
I have cursed motherhood because of you | J |
Accursed base motherhood | Z |
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I long for the time to come when the curse against you will have gone out of my heart | Z |
But it has not gone yet | Z |
Nevertheless once the frogs the globe flowers of Bavaria the glow worms | K |
Gave me sweet lymph against the salt burns | K |
There is a kindness in the very rain | B2 |
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Therefore even in the hour of my deepest pas sionate malediction | B2 |
I try to remember it is also well between us | K |
That you are with me in the end | Z |
That you never look quite back nine tenths ah more | D |
You look round over your shoulder | D |
But never quite back | C2 |
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Nevertheless the curse against you is still in my heart | Z |
Like a deep deep burn | B2 |
The curse against all mothers | K |
All mothers who fortify themselves in motherhood devastating the vision | B2 |
They are accursed and the curse is not taken off | D2 |
It burns within me like a deep old burn | B2 |
And oh I wish it was better | D |
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BEUERBERG | C2 |
D. H. Lawrence (david Herbert Richards)
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