Safaniyah Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAAA BCAA DDEE FFAG HHIJ| We started as choirmates then became bestfriends forever | A |
| Singing songs that only us can sing and no one can make it better | A |
| Sharing same thoughts jokes memories that filled with laughter | A |
| It came to a point that people see us as dumb and dumberer | A |
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| We became lovers and you are my clock that gives tick tocks in my heart | B |
| But you said it's like a fart If you have to force it It's probably a crap | C |
| We laugh like there's no tomorrow years of happiness with no room for sorrow | A |
| But fate gave us something that is hard to swallow | A |
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| The storm is fast approaching and we don't know when it will end | D |
| And your eyes are just staring and you can't hide and pretend | D |
| But we smile like there's nothing is wrong believing we can still go on | E |
| But my star is slowly dying like our favorite scene in saigon | E |
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| You said that it is really nothing but your eyes is tired pretending | F |
| And I see you struggling coz you're not good at lying | F |
| I can't just ignore those silence that i hear | A |
| It's so loud and excruciating and i thought that it's not real | G |
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| Tears began slowly flowing as i lay you down on your deathbed | H |
| While my lips is busy singing i m screaming your name inside my head | H |
| Your body looks drawn dead tired but your heart remains serene | I |
| You have fought a good fight that no one can imagine | J |
Charles Gallardo
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/17/2020
Poet's note: This poem is for my late wife Safaniyah. She died in an accident. I miss her so much.
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