Jim's Whip Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCB ADADAD EFEFGF HIJIJI KLKLML NDNDOD PQPQGQ RSRSCS HTJTJTYes there it hangs upon the wall | A |
And never gives a sound | B |
The hand that trimmed its greenhide fall | A |
Is hidden underground | B |
There in that patch of sallee shade | C |
Beneath that grassy mound | B |
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I never take it from the wall | A |
That whip belonged to him | D |
The man I singled from them all | A |
He was my husband Jim | D |
I see him now so straight and tall | A |
So long and lithe of limb | D |
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That whip was with him night and day | E |
When he was on the track | F |
I've often heard him laugh and say | E |
That when they heard its crack | F |
After the breaking of the drought | G |
The cattle all came back | F |
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And all the time that Jim was here | H |
A working on the run | I |
I'd hear that whip ring sharp and clear | J |
Just about the set of sun | I |
To let me know that he was near | J |
And that his work was done | I |
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I was away that afternoon | K |
Penning the calves when a bang | L |
I heard his whip 'twas rather soon | K |
A thousand echoes rang | L |
And died away among the hills | M |
As towards the hut I sprang | L |
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I made the tea and waited but | N |
Seized by a sudden whim | D |
I went and sat outside the hut | N |
And watched the light grow dim | D |
I waited there till after dark | O |
But not a sign of Jim | D |
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The evening air was damp with dew | P |
Just as the clock struck ten | Q |
His horse came riderless I knew | P |
What was the matter then | Q |
Why should the Lord have singled out | G |
My Jim from other men | Q |
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I took the horse and found him where | R |
He lay beneath the sky | S |
With blood all clotted on his hair | R |
I felt too dazed to cry | S |
I held him to me as I prayed | C |
To God that I might die | S |
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But sometimes now I seem to hear | H |
Just when the air grows chill | T |
A single whip crack sharp and clear | J |
Re echo from the hill | T |
That's Jim to let me know he's near | J |
And thinking of me still | T |
Barcroft Henry Thomas Boake
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