Jim's Whip Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCB ADADAD EFEFGF HIJIJI KLKLML NDNDOD PQPQGQ RSRSCS HTJTJT

Yes there it hangs upon the wallA
And never gives a soundB
The hand that trimmed its greenhide fallA
Is hidden undergroundB
There in that patch of sallee shadeC
Beneath that grassy moundB
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I never take it from the wallA
That whip belonged to himD
The man I singled from them allA
He was my husband JimD
I see him now so straight and tallA
So long and lithe of limbD
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That whip was with him night and dayE
When he was on the trackF
I've often heard him laugh and sayE
That when they heard its crackF
After the breaking of the droughtG
The cattle all came backF
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And all the time that Jim was hereH
A working on the runI
I'd hear that whip ring sharp and clearJ
Just about the set of sunI
To let me know that he was nearJ
And that his work was doneI
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I was away that afternoonK
Penning the calves when a bangL
I heard his whip 'twas rather soonK
A thousand echoes rangL
And died away among the hillsM
As towards the hut I sprangL
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I made the tea and waited butN
Seized by a sudden whimD
I went and sat outside the hutN
And watched the light grow dimD
I waited there till after darkO
But not a sign of JimD
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The evening air was damp with dewP
Just as the clock struck tenQ
His horse came riderless I knewP
What was the matter thenQ
Why should the Lord have singled outG
My Jim from other menQ
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I took the horse and found him whereR
He lay beneath the skyS
With blood all clotted on his hairR
I felt too dazed to cryS
I held him to me as I prayedC
To God that I might dieS
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But sometimes now I seem to hearH
Just when the air grows chillT
A single whip crack sharp and clearJ
Re echo from the hillT
That's Jim to let me know he's nearJ
And thinking of me stillT

Barcroft Henry Thomas Boake



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