The Passing Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB DDED EFDF GDHD IDJD KLIL JFMF DNDN OPD DDND DQRQ NST TDUD TPD VJHW QDDD DXDX YDZD DA2B2A2 DFUF C2DD2D DWE2J F2F2C2F2 F2G2DG2 WDDD F2H2I2H2 TJ2F2J2 C2K2L2K2 DDND DNTN UHM2H NDH2D NDUD D2H2DH2 C2DDD D2G2C2G2 F2LD UDDD C2DD2D

It was the hour of dawnA
When the heart beats thin and smallB
The window glimmered greyC
Framed in a shadow wallB
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And in the cold sad lightD
Of the early morningtideD
The dear dead girl came backE
And stood by his bedsideD
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The girl he lost came backE
He saw her flowing hairF
It flickered and it wavedD
Like a breath in frosty airF
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As in a steamy glassG
Her face was dim and blurredD
Her voice was sweet and thinH
Like the calling of a birdD
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'You said that you would comeI
You promised not to stayD
And I have waited hereJ
To help you on the wayD
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'I have waited onK
But still you bide belowL
You said that you would comeI
And oh I want you soL
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'For half my soul is hereJ
And half my soul is thereF
When you are on the earthM
And I am in the airF
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'But on your dressing standD
There lies a triple keyN
Unlock the little gateD
Which fences you from meN
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'Just one little pangO
Just one throb of painP
And then your weary headD
Between my breasts again '-
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In the dim unhomely lightD
Of the early morningtideD
He took the triple keyN
And he laid it by his sideD
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A pistol silver chasedD
An open hunting knifeQ
A phial of the drugR
Which cures the ill of lifeQ
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He looked upon the threeN
And sharply drew his breathS
'Now help me oh my loveT
For I fear this cold grey death '-
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She bent her face aboveT
She kissed him and she smiledD
She soothed him as a motherU
May sooth a frightened childD
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'Just that little pang loveT
Just a throb of painP
And then your weary headD
Between my breasts again '-
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He snatched the pistol upV
He pressed it to his earJ
But a sudden sound broke inH
And his skin was raw with fearW
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He took the hunting knifeQ
He tried to raise the bladeD
It glimmered cold and whiteD
And he was sore afraidD
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He poured the potion outD
But it was thick and brownX
His throat was sealed against itD
And he could not drain it downX
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He looked to her for helpY
And when he looked beholdD
His love was there before himZ
As in the days of oldD
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He saw the drooping headD
He saw the gentle eyesA2
He saw the same shy grace of hersB2
He had been wont to prizeA2
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She pointed and she smiledD
And lo he was awareF
Of a half lit bedroom chamberU
And a silent figure thereF
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A silent figure lyingC2
A sprawl upon a bedD
With a silver mounted pistolD2
Still clotted to his headD
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And as he downward gazedD
Her voice came full and clearW
The homely tender voiceE2
Which he had loved to hearJ
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'The key is very certainF2
The door is sealed to noneF2
You did it oh my darlingC2
And you never knew it doneF2
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'When the net was brokenF2
You thought you felt its meshG2
You carried to the spiritD
The troubles of the fleshG2
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'And are you trembling still dearW
Then let me take your handD
And I will lead you outwardD
To a sweet and restful landD
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'You know how once in LondonF2
I put my griefs on youH2
But I can carry yours nowI2
Most sweet it is to doH2
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'Most sweet it is to do loveT
And very sweet to planJ2
How I the helpless womanF2
Can help the helpful manJ2
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'But let me see you smilingC2
With the smile I know so wellK2
Forget the world of shadowsL2
And the empty broken shellK2
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'It is the worn out garmentD
In which you tore a rentD
You tossed it down and carelesslyN
Upon your way you wentD
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'It is not YOU my sweetheartD
For you are here with meN
That frame was but the promise ofT
The thing that was to beN
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'A tuning of the choirU
Ere the harmonies beginH
And yet it is the imageM2
Of the subtle thing withinH
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'There's not a trick of bodyN
There's not a trait of mindD
But you bring it over with youH2
Ethereal refinedD
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'But still the same for surelyN
If we alter as we dieD
You would be you no longerU
And I would not be ID
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'I might be an angelD2
But not the girl you knewH2
You might be immaculateD
But that would not be youH2
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'And now I see you smilingC2
So darling take my handD
And I will lead you outwardD
To a sweet and pleasant landD
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'Where thought is clear and nimbleD2
Where life is pure and freshG2
Where the soul comes back rejoicingC2
From the mud bath of the fleshG2
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'But still that soul is humanF2
With human ways and soL
I love my love in spiritD
As I loved him long ago '-
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So with hands togetherU
And fingers twining tightD
The two dead lovers driftedD
In the golden morning lightD
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But a grey haired man was lyingC2
Beneath them on a bedD
With a silver mounted pistolD2
Still clotted to his headD

Arthur Conan Doyle



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