Love Song: I And Thou Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOEPMQR QSTULVWXYZA2

Nothing is plumb level or squareA
the studs are bowed the joistsB
are shaky by nature no piece fitsC
any other piece without a gapD
or pinch and bent nailsE
dance all over the surfacingF
like maggots By ChristG
I am no carpenter I builtH
the roof for myself the wallsI
for myself the floorsJ
for myself and gotK
hung up in it myself IL
danced with a purple thumbM
at this house warming drunkN
with my prime whiskey rageO
Oh I spat rage s nailsE
into the frame up of my workP
it held It settled plumbM
level solid square and trueQ
for that great moment ThenR
it screamed and went on throughQ
skewing as wrong the other wayS
God damned it This is hellT
but I planned it I sawed itU
I nailed it and IL
will live in it until it kills meV
I can nail my left palmW
to the left hand crosspiece butX
I can t do everything myselfY
need a hand to nail the rightZ
a help a love a you a wifeA2

Alan Dugan



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