My Mother In My Brother Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDEF GHI JFKLMFNC OPQLast time I saw my vines | A |
I was years tall | B |
Last time I held love | C |
I was years tall | B |
She gave her last breath | D |
While giving my brother life | E |
Luckily he lived to tell the tale | F |
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My mother never left Earth | G |
My brother was my mother at her younger age | H |
He was pretty although he was pain | I |
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I started creating love with every smile I received | J |
My life became a tale | F |
Rebounding in tears inside as I saw my brother smiling | K |
I never surrendered hope for a brighter lamp | L |
I kept on holding my inch candle | M |
As it all started becoming a tale | F |
Till my grumpy teacher torn my School trousers | N |
It repremended the thought of having no source of love | C |
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Suicide enrolled in my muddy thoughts | O |
Till I saw my mother smiling through my brother | P |
The candle lit in volumes | Q |
Akhona Snazo Alicia Bushula
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/09/2021
Poet's note: I wote this poem on the 29th of November for my friend Makhatshalala Yanga, when one day our teacher torn his school trousers and he was crying all day saying he misses his late mother. I felt really bad because he couldn't afford to get a new pair of trousers and I couldn't afford to get him a new one, and for the fact that I've got a mother and he doesn't have one. This poem means a lot to me cause he loves it a lot, having a brother that looks exactly like his mother was always a pain to him but after I wrote this poem he found the meaning of his brother's presence and that means a lot to me..
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