The Promise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAAAA ABABAA ACDEA AFGEA AHIHA AJKFA ALMNA AOFLPQRL ASTUA U JUU| The promise | A |
| Life is with promise | A |
| Life is full of promise | A |
| Relationships are built on promise | A |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| I made to God To serve and worship | B |
| Instead of fulfilling the promise | A |
| To serve and worship | B |
| I broke the promise | A |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| I made to my parents | C |
| To obey and serious with my studies | D |
| But kept on falling | E |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| I made to my nation | F |
| To be faithful loyal and honest | G |
| Kept on waving felt like crying | E |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| Made in relationship at times | H |
| End up falling left unfulfilled | I |
| Mostly by me at all times | H |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| Made by the groom at the podium | J |
| To his lovely bride | K |
| End being broken | F |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| Of a bride to her groom at the alter | L |
| To stand firm with all what he has | M |
| Later became lies | N |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| The promise | A |
| Made by us to liberalize ourselves | O |
| Left unfulfilled and broken | F |
| Is linked to Hippocratic behavior | L |
| Which drives my soul to sob | P |
| And weep day by day | Q |
| 'Cause Hippocrates are belittled | R |
| in the sight of the creator | L |
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| Promise to fulfill save the promise | A |
| Neither promise to break | S |
| Nor promise to fail | T |
| 'Cause promise is a debt | U |
| Promise to fail fail to promise | A |
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| Poet Olaitan M Ahmod | U |
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| The message of the poem | J |
| The poem is divided into nine stanzas Each stanzas shows the promises made by human but left unfulfilled In d first stanza d poet shows us the origin and sources of promises Instanzas eight the poet | U |
| Linked promise breaker to be an Hippocrate | U |
Mubarak Alabelewe
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