Dented Fate Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF DDDGHI JDKDDLMNDOD DPDPDDD QQRRJDSTD| What is this sadness of the world you talk about | A |
| What have you felt that we have never had a feel | B |
| What pricks and pinches your heart so madly that we have not witnessed | C |
| Has your eye seen enough the quagmires of this world | D |
| Brother relax indeed you have seen it all | E |
| Yet you have seen nothing | F |
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| The real custodians of this fortuity | D |
| Embrace it with much nobility and sanity | D |
| Not for contentment sake but of the capriciousness of this world | D |
| Even in the full glare of your experience | G |
| They call the bluff of you | H |
| For they are the fate they suffer themselves | I |
| - | |
| Their sight complement the horror | J |
| Which you so badly dread | D |
| And their ears a twin to the news you abhor | K |
| Remember it is not contentment | D |
| But their fate has been predetermined | D |
| That they may be the forbearers of that which | L |
| Never has been their wish | M |
| For they like you would have loved to be what you envisage | N |
| But for fate | D |
| They would have wished for an elusion | O |
| Of an ominous obscurity | D |
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| They have howled in a vigil at night | D |
| And have a conferment with the oracle | P |
| But this has always ended in a nought | D |
| As all efforts have been a debacle | P |
| They had hope for better things all day | D |
| Yet all they get is nay | D |
| From the gods and lords of their fate | D |
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| Make no efforts to ridicule them | Q |
| They have made enough hem | Q |
| As a signal to the weavers | R |
| Of the fate they uphold in tatters | R |
| For there to be a waiver | J |
| Of this ominous obscurity | D |
| Alas it is clear | S |
| That they are the heirs | T |
| Of a gloomy fate in perpetuity | D |
Agyare Isaac
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Poet's note: The disparity of this world is outrageous. It is for this reason there was an informed decision to lament over this inequalities of the world. Many people have questioned this inequality that rules the world. People have expressed their displeasure in the maker for allowing such a huge gap to come between people. People suffer different fates in their lifetime. Some leave in abject poverty, others incurable diseases and a host of privations. This poem talks about how people have tried on countless occasions to overturn their fate. Unfortunately, it cannot be undone as these fates are predetermined.
The persona admonishes people not to ridicule such persons as they have invested more than enough to have their fates of suffering, poverty, sickness and other kind of misfortunes overturned in futility. To the persona, these people never wished to experience these quagmires but are forced to bear it because of their fate. Most of these people suffer such miserable fate all their life time. It is important for those who are fortunate to accept them, comfort them and also help them so they do not wallow in sorrow all day.
The poem centres on themes of suffering, degree to which people suffer, discrimination, and the destiny of people.
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