The Primitive Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCDEEFEGGThey wear tight fitting dresses thinking it is fame | A |
Yet it is an insult | B |
It really brings them shame | A |
As the only result | B |
They wear transparent dresses comfortably | C |
To attract everyone's attention | D |
Because they expose their sensitive parts fully | C |
Why do they make such a decision | D |
Clothes of opposite sex is their desire | E |
When boys and girls gather | E |
You don't need to inquire | F |
Since they look the same all together | E |
This fashion is considered happiness | G |
Yet it is a serious weakness | G |
Tryphena Afayo
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/17/2021
Poet's note: I am criticising the youths who called themselves 'modernized', yet it is the opposite.
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